My little complaints. -Can you allow them to have their mouth move while they are speaking, because I got really confused of which one who is who. -Also if they do speak, please use quotation marks.
This is good though! The story line is interesting.
- I sure hope there is images between the two (Like her wrapping a bandaid over finger, or her craving an applebunny.) To make it feel more immersive and stuff!
Oh yes of course, I used to get that way with my writing. I love the idea of a reverse yandere where the player can pursue the yandere/love interest while also being yandere. Don't get me wrong I love a good old fashioned yandere playthrough but I'm IN LOVE with the idea of the roles being reversed. The script and idea is very well written. This story deserves all of the recognition in the world and more :) I send you all of the writers inspo you can get, I'm sure all of the coding and art work and writing can probably knock a lot out of you and send you into writers block; so heres to hoping that doesn't happen! I'd absolutely love to finish this story and will probably frequently check this page for updates anytime I can <3
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Pleaassee finish the game I'm dying to know the end!!
My little complaints.
-Can you allow them to have their mouth move while they are speaking, because I got really confused of which one who is who.
-Also if they do speak, please use quotation marks.
This is good though! The story line is interesting.
- I sure hope there is images between the two (Like her wrapping a bandaid over finger, or her craving an applebunny.) To make it feel more immersive and stuff!
The colors show who is talking!
This is really good so far
i loved playing this and enjoyed the story so far
Cool! keep up the great work <3
I really love this story so far. Can't wait to see where you take it, I'm super stoked!
Thank you! Knowing that somebody enjoyed it gives me the strength to finish the story. ^_^
Oh yes of course, I used to get that way with my writing. I love the idea of a reverse yandere where the player can pursue the yandere/love interest while also being yandere. Don't get me wrong I love a good old fashioned yandere playthrough but I'm IN LOVE with the idea of the roles being reversed. The script and idea is very well written. This story deserves all of the recognition in the world and more :) I send you all of the writers inspo you can get, I'm sure all of the coding and art work and writing can probably knock a lot out of you and send you into writers block; so heres to hoping that doesn't happen! I'd absolutely love to finish this story and will probably frequently check this page for updates anytime I can <3
Thanks. <3 I'm planning to make the next update only after it's 100% complete. I'll post here as soon as it's done.